Gov't Cheese ~ original pop/folk ~ R24

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Lungfruit
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Gov't Cheese ~ original pop/folk ~ R24

Post by Lungfruit » Mon Sep 11, 2017 6:55 pm

So I think this song needs a little explanation. Government cheese was provided to low income families when I was growing up. This song is about a man who is trying to decide if he wants to be this women's third husband (#3) and the fact she "gets the cheese" is a big factor. :D

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Re: Gov't Cheese ~ original pop/folk ~ R24

Post by The Cracks » Tue Sep 12, 2017 12:30 pm

That was very good. Creative idea and well written. The line about the kids smirking was rather insightful of that situation.

Well played. Nice recording.

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