Song Submission: "I Will Love You"
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Song Submission: "I Will Love You"
Hi,
My name is David Tryner.
Below is a link to a song entitled: "I WILL LOVE YOU", which I recorded on my Zoom 1004 multi recorder.
http://www.showcaseyourmusic.com/davetryner
Thank you for listening.
Best Wishes,
David
My name is David Tryner.
Below is a link to a song entitled: "I WILL LOVE YOU", which I recorded on my Zoom 1004 multi recorder.
http://www.showcaseyourmusic.com/davetryner
Thank you for listening.
Best Wishes,
David
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Re: Song Submission: "I Will Love You"
David - That is one very well written, performed and produced piece of music.
Bravo!
Bravo!
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Re: Song Submission: "I Will Love You"
Thanks Bravo for your comments, it's very much appreciated.
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Re: Song Submission: "I Will Love You"
David, nice tune, excellent instrumental work. The harmonies took me back to the 60s when we actually listened to the lyrics. I like your voice. Welcome to Zoomland. Roy
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Re: Song Submission: "I Will Love You"
David,
Nice work. The mix is nice except the bass rattles my speakers, but strangely, not my head phones. You have a good voice for that genre. I like the addition of the strings. Glenn
Nice work. The mix is nice except the bass rattles my speakers, but strangely, not my head phones. You have a good voice for that genre. I like the addition of the strings. Glenn
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Re: Song Submission: "I Will Love You"
Good song, nice work on the vocals. I don't like the single note harpsichord thing which is all over the song, I'd be interested in a remix without it to hear more of the rest of the instruments.
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Re: Song Submission: "I Will Love You"
Thanks Roy, Glenn and GreenA2 for listening and for your comments. I have taken them on board.
Regards,
David
Regards,
David
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Re: Song Submission: "I Will Love You"
Dave, this is very nice. Very pretty. Especially love your vocal and harmony work. Top notch songwriting.


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Re: Song Submission: "I Will Love You"
Sounds good. It's a pretty song.
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Re: Song Submission: "I Will Love You"
Late I'm afraid and you may never read this but I enjoyed the song.
Nicely written and performed. The overlapping vocal parts have a touch of a show tune about them.
Cheers
Dick
Nicely written and performed. The overlapping vocal parts have a touch of a show tune about them.
Cheers
Dick
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