Song Submission: "I Will Love You"

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Song Submission: "I Will Love You"

Post by d.atryner » Fri Oct 07, 2016 11:01 am

Hi,

My name is David Tryner.

Below is a link to a song entitled: "I WILL LOVE YOU", which I recorded on my Zoom 1004 multi recorder.

http://www.showcaseyourmusic.com/davetryner

Thank you for listening.

Best Wishes,
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Re: Song Submission: "I Will Love You"

Post by BobF » Fri Oct 07, 2016 3:11 pm

David - That is one very well written, performed and produced piece of music.

Bravo!

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Re: Song Submission: "I Will Love You"

Post by d.atryner » Sat Oct 08, 2016 3:27 am

Thanks Bravo for your comments, it's very much appreciated.

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Re: Song Submission: "I Will Love You"

Post by Roy-Al » Sat Oct 08, 2016 1:47 pm

David, nice tune, excellent instrumental work. The harmonies took me back to the 60s when we actually listened to the lyrics. I like your voice. Welcome to Zoomland. Roy
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Re: Song Submission: "I Will Love You"

Post by Lungfruit » Sat Oct 08, 2016 5:56 pm

David,
Nice work. The mix is nice except the bass rattles my speakers, but strangely, not my head phones. You have a good voice for that genre. I like the addition of the strings. Glenn
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Re: Song Submission: "I Will Love You"

Post by greenA2 » Sun Oct 09, 2016 2:52 am

Good song, nice work on the vocals. I don't like the single note harpsichord thing which is all over the song, I'd be interested in a remix without it to hear more of the rest of the instruments.
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Re: Song Submission: "I Will Love You"

Post by d.atryner » Sun Oct 09, 2016 3:41 am

Thanks Roy, Glenn and GreenA2 for listening and for your comments. I have taken them on board.
Regards,
David

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Re: Song Submission: "I Will Love You"

Post by voclizr » Sun Oct 09, 2016 7:29 pm

Dave, this is very nice. Very pretty. Especially love your vocal and harmony work. Top notch songwriting.

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Re: Song Submission: "I Will Love You"

Post by The Cracks » Tue Oct 11, 2016 6:36 pm

Sounds good. It's a pretty song.
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Re: Song Submission: "I Will Love You"

Post by dickl » Fri Dec 02, 2016 9:30 am

Late I'm afraid and you may never read this but I enjoyed the song.

Nicely written and performed. The overlapping vocal parts have a touch of a show tune about them.

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